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Wanderer
Contributed by
brokenheartedfool
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Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 04:14:55 PM in AEST
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As I wonder through this land I see many things.
Death, pain, destruction, and chaos just to name a few
People need to stop and think about the actions that they take
Its funny how tears and blood always seem to fall together
Personally Ill be happy when I die
No more problems and never to be hurt again
Who can ask for anything more then the sweetest release of all
Maybe when death comes to us then we will see the wrongs we have done
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2003-11-01 16:14:55]
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Re: Wanderer
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 04:36:18 PM AEST
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A good poem and I to have felt the same way as you, but you gotta make life worthwhile and then you won't wanna die. Good poem though and I hope u find the things that u seek.
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Re: Wanderer
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 09:17:48 PM AEST
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So tragic, when your only hope is death!
This was a wonderful example of great words, and so moving and impressive....who needs the rhyme?
I think you did just great.....do it again!
lovingcritters
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