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My biggest fear
Contributed by
irshprnss
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Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 03:43:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I wonder what the world looks like
When you see it through your eyes
Staring into the unknown
That in your innocence holds no lies
Looking up to everything, too little to look down
Seeing the pain and hurt in the world
Yet unable to understand the sounds
You can focus on the news while you sit there in your swing
Still the hurt, the pain, the realization of war
Doesn't mean a thing
Holding you in my arms
Knowing I can protect you when your here
But understanding that you will grow up
And that is my biggest fear
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irshprnss
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2003-11-01 15:43:42]
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Re: My biggest fear
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by norticus on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 04:04:04 PM AEST
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| It's interesting how we transpose our own thoughts & paranoia onto our speechless children. I wonder if a baby would think blood was pretty or if they would know something is wrong. For the thought I give this a 4 on the Nortiscale. |
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Re: My biggest fear
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by sugar0986 on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 04:12:29 PM AEST
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very touching, and beautifully written. keep up the good work.
~Brittany~ |
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Re: My biggest fear
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 04:21:08 PM AEST
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Excellent write..I know exactly what you mean here.... been thinking the same thing lately..while watching how quickly my nephew is growing ...he's 9...
Thanks for sharing this..
Jenni |
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