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Why?
Contributed by
hot-shot
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Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 01:40:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Those days when the cool breeze was blowing,
When the sun was shimmering,
When birds were singing their beautiful notes,
Our love bloomed like a flower.
But everyday has its end,
And our blooming love also finished.
We can’t be one heart,
Cause you never try to understand me.
Then why did you come into my life?
Then why did you take my breath away?
Then why did you make my life a dream?
Then why did you love me?
If you loved, then why did you break my heart?
You didn’t just break my heart
You broke my hope,
You made me weak,
You took away my happiness,
You didn’t do anything my love
You just ruined my life.
My love, I am just asking why, why, why???..
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2003-11-01 13:40:34]
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Re: Why?
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 10:48:04 PM AEST
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| I really liked your poem it reminded me of some of the things i wrote when i went through a bad point in my life.... keep up the good work |
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Re: Why?
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 03:55:23 PM AEST
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aghh such a sad emotional piece. I hope u know that you will get over your girl/guy soon and you will be able to see the sun again and smile.
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