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On the twelth day
Contributed by
Coquillion
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Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 10:50:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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On the twelfth day of Christmas
My truelove got from ME !
Twelve creepy crawly things,
eleven things with fatal stings,
ten things with gaping jaws,
nine things with teeth and claws,
eight things that scratch and bite,
seven things that feed at night,
six things that suck your blood,
FIVE POISONED RINGS,
four killer rats,
three rabid bats,
two years in hell,
AND A TICKET TO ETERNITY.
Copyright ©
Coquillion
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2003-11-01 10:50:16]
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Re: On the twelth day
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by norticus on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 04:21:55 PM AEST
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| I would love to understand the five poisoned rings part, but I did understand the hatred you were trying to communicate here. I liked it. I give it a 4.3 on the Nortiscale. |
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Re: On the twelth day
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 04:52:01 PM AEST
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lmao this was great
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Re: On the twelth day
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 07:56:03 PM AEST
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LMAO! I love it!! I'd like to send this to a few people.... hehehehehehe......
~ Moonlit |
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