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eternal cycles
Contributed by
forever_lonely
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Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 10:50:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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In springtime frost cascades in gutters as
a thousand falling tears of shifting stone
might fall when fleeting restoration has
in blushing flesh esconced the sterile bone
This flesh will melt like snowflakes into dust;
Such fragile microcosms must collapse
but even ancient forests will combust
and grow from fragile shoots as age lapse.
The changing drifts of continents are seen
to bounce, in slow eternal cycles eyes;
cavorting constellations all careen
in steady circles through the inky skies....
Such eternal cycles are never through;
Through all our changes, i will always love you
Copyright ©
forever_lonely
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2003-11-01 10:50:06]
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Re: eternal cycles
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by norticus on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 04:24:12 PM AEST
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| I had to read it over a couple of times but this is about green beans right? I give it 4 on the Nortiscale. |
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Re: eternal cycles
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 06:30:06 PM AEST
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Holy ....!!! WoW!!!!!!! This one is really touching!!!!!!! Very vivid imagery! Beautiful words and such a romantic ending! It has a dark sens in the begining and romantic theme! Only you could come up with such an amazing poem! Wonderful!!!!! Keep it up!!!!!!!!
Anne :D!! Xxx |
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