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Wicked Windmill
Contributed by
norticus
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Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 10:08:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Down again the windmill turns
Blow down the fire in which I burn
Reach for the blade & sever my hand
Wicked circle destroys the man
Away fan turns, carried by wind
When one rev. ends another begins
Never build windmails on foundations of sand
Wicked circle destroys the man.
jz
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Re: Wicked Windmill
(User Rating: 1 ) by Good_King_Bragi on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 04:21:07 AM AEST (User
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Well, as a practising Buddhist, I guess that "what goes around, comes around". Great, intriguing write. |
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Re: Wicked Windmill
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 10:52:35 PM AEST (User
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interesting to say the least
For the mind it is a feast
makes one think about things
and what consequences brings
Shari 3.3 on ilharograph |
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