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Raindrops stars in a river of time
Contributed by
forever_lonely
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Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 08:11:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Flowing through rivers of time
Waters of crystal clear proportions
Clouded by memories soon to be lost
Tranquility but a hearts whisper near
This poem i write from the heavens my dear
Light so bright within a shadow
Gleaming within a dearkened soul
Its brightness only met by its beauty
Spread across so many lives
In its prism soothing alone
My eternal sleep is inevitable
Forever an eternity, in a finite world
But death has so far to come
Entwined deep within, my essence complete
A story of love, of passion, a story of deceit
Raindrops fall like stars from your heart
Each one a different story, burning so bright
The truth is a whisper deep within all
Remember were all ghosts of memories
Trapped in a river of time
....i am so lost
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forever_lonely
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2003-11-01 08:11:19]
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Re: Raindrops stars in a river of time
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by norticus on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 10:18:46 AM AEST
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| This was real cool. I like the tempo and the use of the word dearkened. I give this a 3.7 on the Nortiscale. |
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Re: Raindrops stars in a river of time
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 10:27:56 AM AEST
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I love this... especially the last stanza... very creative. :)
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Re: Raindrops stars in a river of time
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 06:41:03 PM AEST
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Geezz the more i read from your poems the more I get the feeling that you are a great poet!! WoW!!!!!!! Amazing!!
Anne :D |
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