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A Call to Shadows
Contributed by
full_blur
on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 03:03:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I will this vibrant cooling,
to drain a day of everything wrong,
from a shuttered dwelling.
Maybe this tepid fooling,
will entice them before long,
to notice a spark failing.
Maybe once, you'll cross the meadow,
weave through puddles of loss,
and grasp all we have shown.
No, Forget this call to shadows,
and live without the thoughts,
that rot a pitiful home.
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full_blur
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2003-11-01 03:03:30] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A Call to Shadows
(User Rating: 1 ) by scott_milton on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 04:45:19 AM AEST (User
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nice choice of words and structure/flow, you remind me of how a friend of mine writes. |
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