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untitled
Contributed by
rain
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Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 10:54:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
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i pray to live
when i want to die
i pray for tears
when i cant cry
i've lost myself
in my own dark thoughts
ive lost my mind
im torn apart
i cant sleep
dont want to eat
i cant breath
just want to leave
i cant brake these chains
i cant leave this place
im a prisoner again
a prisoner of my own dark thoughts
i pray to live
when i want to die
i pray for tears
when i cant cry
ive lost myself
in my own dark thoughts
ive lost my mind
im torn apart.
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Re: untitled
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by emystar on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 12:29:59 AM AEST
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Very well written!
Hang tuff. please?
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: untitled
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by PsychoticDreamz on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 12:33:02 AM AEST
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So simple yet powerful..I can totally relate to this right now. Wonderfully written..Loved it
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Re: untitled
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by Cobalt on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 11:52:23 AM AEST
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| I really liked this man I loved the wording. As someone used to love to tell me, 'look to the sky and remember to smile', well I don't think thats quite right I'd have to be able to find her again but that is the general twist. |
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