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Music Everyday
Contributed by
AngryBunny
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Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 09:43:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Everyday he listens to his music
A new verse more appealing than the last
There’s a better song to sing
And a greater loss to mourn
Everyday he looks more the same
Like the last never became the next
But the complacent countenance
Paints over his deep, dark eyes
Hung upon a crooked neck
Everyday those eyes turn over
And wish to be a different color
They capture a certain electricity
And turn on, turn off, turn on
Everyday he speaks with an unaltering voice
Monotones and melancholy lace his tongue
Too many songs have been sung
But not enough cries of joy
Everyday the music plays
He dives into the notes and words
The notes of a tearful violin
And the words of an unknown soul
Copyright ©
AngryBunny
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2003-10-31 21:43:53]
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Re: Music Everyday
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by Cancer on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 10:17:35 PM AEST
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that was incredible. as strange as this may sound, i think you chose the perfect words for every line, every description. absolutely amazing.
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Re: Music Everyday
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by full_blur on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 02:10:26 AM AEST
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| your visualization is amazing, you kept me spellbound! great poem. |
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Re: Music Everyday
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 05:10:23 PM AEST
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This was odd, but put some awesome imagery in my head
Hung upon a crooked neck
Loved that line as well as the last stanza. Good poem.
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