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Blind
Contributed by
brokenheartedfool
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Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 08:13:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Everything in the world taunts me
Everywhere she is what I see
The thoughts I try to hide
I try to have some pride
As a man im suppose to be strong
But everything seems so wrong
The world is upside down
Im not sure if I even live in the same town
Am I the only one that sees
All the upside down trees
Blind I might be
But I dont think anybody else can see
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2003-10-31 20:13:07]
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Re: Blind
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 08:14:54 PM AEST
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| Dude I like this one. I think you need to move on though if things are really as bad as they seem. Find strength in yourself if she comes back then it was meant to be if not ca est la vie. I used to hate being told this but find it is true. |
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Re: Blind
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by Stalkee on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 08:20:45 PM AEST
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| great poem, i like it a lot |
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Re: Blind
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by Cancer on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 10:15:07 PM AEST
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very powerful write. so much truth, so simply said.
"Blind I might be
But I dont think anybody else can see"
i couldn't agree more with those two lines. great write.
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