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Towers
Contributed by
Cobalt
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Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 07:19:08 PM in AEST
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As he descends through all worlds in a step. Walking forth towards you in all your glory. Arms crossed on his chest. Even giants qauke in his wake. Yet only you stand your ground adamant in your stance. Beset him in a trance filled his heart with awe. Running with him through a garden set in darkness. Brimming full of evil intent to destroy stopped only by your glare. Watching as this story unfolds can't seem to turn away. Try to intervene but set aside like a child. Want to run to your side but you won't let me. Should have been there long ago, now to late never could have saved you. Now only regret is my company knowing not to dwell but how could I just move on? Loved you oh so much. Now you've gone away and I've no one to touch.
2003 The book of the Damned Spirit
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Cobalt
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2003-10-31 19:19:08]
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Re: Towers
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 09:10:13 PM AEST
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Great imagery.A lot of strength and yet feelings of sadness and longing,regret.
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Re: Towers
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 06:38:54 PM AEST
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Cobalt,
You know, I was looking at one of my earlier poems and I saw a comment left by you. So I thought hey, I'm going to read up on this Cobalt person =) So here I am, at the beginning..... I find this poem very mysterious.... It's very much like a dream. The wolf thing in the authors notes is an awesome topic.... It gave me a picture. You know, you should try the wolf thing again... it's a cool topice, I think..... very .... mystifying....
great write,
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Re: Towers
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by Putteragain on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 03:55:07 PM AEST
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i see your meaning
wished it were longer
michelle |
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Re: Towers
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by Mr_Jeremy on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 07:54:39 AM AEST
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| This is some kind of bright-dream. Giant ducks have me in awe. |
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