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PENATENTARY
Contributed by
justinblue
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Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 04:54:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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An inmate trapped behind this addictions concrete block walls
Surrounded, suppressed by it's razor wire
Best friends with Mr. theif and Sir liar
I'm cutting that wire
And demolishing those hard concrete walls
Sir liar and Mr. theif
No longer my cheif
I soak and absorb the knowledge of my lord as he calls
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2003-10-31 16:54:29]
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Re: PENATENTARY
(User Rating: 1 )
by sugar0986 on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 04:57:47 PM AEST
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| I like this Poem alot too. Keep up the good work. |
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Re: PENATENTARY
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 04:58:53 PM AEST
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Excellent!! Positive vibes from this one.Makes me wanna celebrate or something lol..
"Sir liar and Mr. theif
No longer my cheif
Neat lines! |
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Re: PENATENTARY
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 05:01:46 PM AEST
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Excellent!! Positive vibes from this one.Makes me wanna celebrate or something lol..
"Sir liar and Mr. theif
No longer my cheif
Neat lines! |
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