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Colorblind
Contributed by
SkYYBLu
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Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 03:48:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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Moonlight shines through my window pane,
While'st reflecting the tears that run down my face
I know that I am not alone...
Though I know not to whom my soul truly belongeth
Forever I have searched in vain!
Forever I have waited for love to awaken!
...But it never did...
And now I look up at the bright moonlit sky
And wonder why
My life is one big unanswered question,
Something that can be plotted out in black and white
--------Whenever it pleases
Am I possessed?
Have I gone mad?
I have lost my sanity, my identity, even my morality.
I have no sense of right and wrong,
Black and white
They all seem the same to me...
For I am colorblind
Without my love,
Happiness has been alienated from my heart.
I know not the difference,
Between a chuckle and a sob.
They all seem the same to me...
For I am deaf.
Though I cannot see what has become of me
And I cannot hear what is happening to me
I am not alone
I can feel a presence
A touch... a shadow... a hope...
Though I cannot see it or hear it,
I know it is there.
I know I have a reason to live.
I know hope exists
For there are some things,
That I can see
And I can hear
I must not stray from it
I must not let go...
For it is the only thing that I know I can trust
Copyright ©
SkYYBLu
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2003-10-31 15:48:24]
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Re: Colorblind
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 04:10:51 PM AEST
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Oh, I wouldn't laugh at you, I think you have a very nice work of art here. you did great =)
Love Joy and Peace,
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Re: Colorblind
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by Swallow on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 04:23:10 PM AEST
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| Nothing to laugh at here. This is so moving, so touching. I could feel my heart break as I read it . . . |
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Re: Colorblind
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 04:53:58 PM AEST
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Laugh hun?? I think not!!!
I had tears reading this.If you felt alone before,then you have come to the right place here.You are part of our family now and you will never be alone again.This is a totally heartwrenching piece and you expressed yourself wonderfully....You can smile now...because soon there will be a difference between your chuckles and your sobs.You have talent..be proud hun.
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Re: Colorblind
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 06:40:52 PM AEST
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| I don't see why anyone would have laughed. If I could easily cry right now I do agree I think I would have. I think it was beautiful. If anyone laughs don't worry I'll go kick their arse. |
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Re: Colorblind
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 10:40:54 PM AEST
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| Wow, this is really good!! -- Welcome to YPDC!! |
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