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SAVE OUR CHILDREN
Contributed by
emystar
on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 05:39:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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Out on the street
no place to lay their heads.
No luv to warm them
not even a pillow or bed!
Can't stay at home
for the things we do.
Whats happened to
togetherness, Mommy,
Daddy and you?
Bless our children
start a new race!
Give them luv
put smiles on their faces.
Bless our children
that live in the street!
Bless our children
All yours, unique!
Please father we pray
turn them into luv!
Let's show your touch,
peace, protection from
above.
It's a mess this place
sin, shame, you know.
Teach them a better way.
Give us love to grow.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2003-10-31 05:39:09]
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Re: SAVE OUR CHILDREN
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by kalika_vidya on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 05:55:13 AM AEST
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| really a heart touching poem..I pray for those children..K |
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Re: SAVE OUR CHILDREN
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 06:30:25 AM AEST
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| Now THIS is what I like to see..a beautiful heart and caring soul..Bless you hun.This is a touching write.Even to take time out to think and write about them is just wonderful and shows how selfless you are. *smiles and (((hugs))) |
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Re: SAVE OUR CHILDREN
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 07:29:57 PM AEST
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| very good write, great thought to pass on. Crow |
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Re: SAVE OUR CHILDREN
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 01:39:50 AM AEST
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Emy...this is so very special.... great reminder to ppl.....
Hugs,
Jenni |
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Re: SAVE OUR CHILDREN
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 05:29:26 PM AEST
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Lots of truth found in your poem. I was absolutely delighted to read it. Great poem.
Kie |
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