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Dreams on Paper Plates
Contributed by
Ravenheart
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Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 09:51:19 PM in AEST
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If one dares dine with Mother Fate,
Who serves your dreams on paper plates,
Beware the one that gets too big,
A plump and tender little pig,
That with its weight does cause to crumble,
Helplessly to earth it tumbles,
And brings on tears so undeserved
A cruel joke for her to serve,
You dreams upon a paper plate,
When you dare dine with Mother Fate.
Copyright ©
Ravenheart
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2003-10-30 21:51:19]
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Re: Dreams on Paper Plates
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by poetrygodslove on
Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 09:53:02 PM AEST
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| Very very good my friend......sandy |
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Re: Dreams on Paper Plates
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 11:11:03 PM AEST
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| short, I like it though, needs a bite at the end |
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Re: Dreams on Paper Plates
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by jaeann on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 03:04:17 AM AEST
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| i feel shocked....the whole feel of it and the sing songy lilt to the words makes me think i've read a psychotic mother goose rhyme......right inbetween miss muffet and simple simon..........this is great!!!!! |
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Re: Dreams on Paper Plates
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 11:43:06 AM AEST
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Yes I too have dined with this cow ..lol
Leaves a bitter taste.This is excellent and I agree with jaeann. |
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Re: Dreams on Paper Plates
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 05:47:12 PM AEST
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| Intriguing write ... and very well written ... Jan |
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