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Illusions of a friendship
Contributed by
irshprnss
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Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 08:49:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Inside cold walls, the windows that are gone reflecting life
No doors to leave, cause friendship isn’t more important than a wife
The only key to the door that isn’t there has fallen through your hands
But you can’t bend down to get it, cause to do so you’d have to be a man
Looking through the windows you can’t see out no more
Only seeing the reflections of what were, the illusions we lived by before
Without you by my side, unable to stand ,I sit in a chair that isn’t there
Holding onto a hand that is an illusion in the mirror of all unfair
Slowly it all melts away leaving me only the serenity of myself
And the friendship left in the room, locked away by someone else
Reflections coming from within the only thing that I can see
So go ahead and walk away, All I can be is me
Copyright ©
irshprnss
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2003-10-30 20:49:48]
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Re: Illusions of a friendship
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by jaeann on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 03:05:46 AM AEST
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ahhhhhhh...my friend i know how this feels..........take care.........
great write!!!! |
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Re: Illusions of a friendship
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 09:31:58 AM AEST
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| Good write. Yeah, it's worse when it's the opposite and you had walked away from your friends but now at least you would know that they really where your friends. Hopefuly one day he will realize something and wake up. Sometimes all it takes is time. |
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Re: Illusions of a friendship
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by Swallow on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 10:51:52 AM AEST
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Isn't it amazing that some of the best poems come from such pain? Very well done.
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