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Jealousy
Contributed by
sabrinacaitlin
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Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 02:19:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
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heart bursting in my chest
blood quickens in my veins
my temperature rises
emotions strengthening their grasp on my sanity
rocking back and forth...
back and forth...
back and forth...
my frusteration slowly breaking my heart
losing my faith...
losing my head...
losing my everything...
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2003-10-30 14:19:27]
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Re: Jealousy
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by Cathie on
Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 02:31:59 PM AEST
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| An expressive poem indeed. I enjoyed how you described it. Good work! |
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Re: Jealousy
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by Swallow on
Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 03:31:04 PM AEST
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| I could actually feel the tumult this emotion causes as I read you're poem. Well done! |
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Re: Jealousy
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by Ravisada on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 03:18:25 AM AEST
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hi, i like your poem
short and sweet |
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