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gurl, we got a problem

Contributed by ml03 on Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 01:50:50 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

you kissed him
he kissed you
does that mean
i can't kiss him
and he can't kiss me
do i have to be a good boy
b/c
truthfully
i know you want his kiss
again and all
maybe a relationship
at some time
and ur my gurl
but i really shouldn't
want ta kiss him
now
but i do
more than ever
and i think
you think
you staked ur claim

why
did you have to go
and tell me
couldn't you wait till i kissed him
and one thing led to another
and another
b/c
now if that happens
even just the kiss
you're gonna get mad
aren't ya
and i don't want the drama
but i want him
maybe not to ****
but to play wit
just a little
mess around

why
oh why
oh why
i just hate
that it's all gonna be drama
cause
i can see it
a little kiss
and ur ******
can you trust him
he just needs a good man
for a night

i wanna stand by ya
and be all cool wit it
but
lately
i see him
in a new light
and i want him
his lip on mine
tenderly
passionly
but now you
enter'd the ******' picture
and he goes
from no one wantin' him
to both of us
and you had the first kiss
and so i guess
i'm suppose to back off
but i don't want to
i want kiss
and hold him tight
i want him
but so do you
gurl

Copyright © ml03 ... [ 2003-10-30 01:50:50]
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Re: gurl, we got a problem (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 03:57:39 AM AEST
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i found this catching me up in what unfolds. so well told. i had to read more of your writes, which i enjoyed. keep it up. painted_echos

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