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I dont want to see her face
Contributed by
brokenheartedfool
on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 11:35:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I feel the knife cut my vein
Never again will I feel any pain
I dont have to worry anymore
My heart will never again be sore
Maybe I will go to a better place
I dont care as long as I dont have to see her face
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Re: I dont want to see her face
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rain on
Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 01:54:35 AM AEST (User
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beautifully dark i like
~sara~ |
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Re: I dont want to see her face
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cammy on
Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 02:57:54 AM AEST (User
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That was amazing. I felt a shiver go down my spine. So very, very good. |
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Re: I dont want to see her face
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stalkee on
Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 07:35:03 AM AEST (User
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great poem, I'm exactly in this place right now. I enjoyed this, well done.
-Stalkee |
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Re: I dont want to see her face
(User Rating: 1 ) by jaeann on
Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 12:51:22 PM AEST (User
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oh wow.......so very dark and painful....so simplistic..........i like this one..... |
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Re: I dont want to see her face
(User Rating: 1 ) by pooja on
Saturday, 17th July 2010 @ 10:58:44 AM AEST (User
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Simple and chilling. Slick work ! |
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