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Never a Word
Contributed by
crow
on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 05:50:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Always wanted you so much,
choice to sit on the side.
Might have had any woman
in the room, in thoughts
you were there, almost to the door,
just about in my arms.
Never take chances to love just a little,
hungry for that glance from across the room.
Deep in the heart I have held you,
voiced in words never heard.
She rises with ease and approches,
intentions pass through their eyes.
She brushes your world
she to has dreamed,
and softly places her hand.... Crow
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Re: Never a Word
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by LovingWhispers on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 06:35:41 PM AEST
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| ohhh this is sooooooo pretty.Beautiful tender feelings .How you must have smiled inside when writing this BRAVO!! *melts in chair* :) |
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Re: Never a Word
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 06:43:11 PM AEST
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like a dance
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Re: Never a Word
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by LovingWhispers on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 10:19:57 PM AEST
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oops..sorry..had to read it again..its just lovely and I cannot believe more have not commented.
"She brushes your world
she to has dreamed,
and softly places her hand...."
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Re: Never a Word
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 11:11:51 PM AEST
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| i cannot pick a line that doesn't touch me along the path..........this is feathery and beautiful.......... |
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Re: Never a Word
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 12:43:19 AM AEST
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A beautiful ballet I once saw never forgot...she came close, but never close enough.....he dreamed, but not too much
They finally fell in each others arms....
What a dreamy write...how tantalizing, one with much sight!
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Re: Never a Word
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 01:54:20 AM AEST
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Wonderful!!!
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