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overpowered
Contributed by
hardcoreputa
on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 05:21:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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At times my mind is overpowered,
-Unable to think straight,
From the anguish within.
I’ve been wronged so many times,
It’s easy to let my pain take over,
And render myself as helpless.
Sometimes, I just sit there –Alone-
Letting my thoughts rule over me,
Until I can think of nothing else.
I’ve battled my depression for years,
It’s never far behind,
But now I know its getting stronger.
I must learn to fight back,
Before it gets too strong,
And completely reigns over my life.
It’s to the point I always feel its presence,
Lingering deep within myself
Consuming all thoughts which were once rational.
I fear I am too weak to fight this,
Soon I will just wallow in self-pity,
As my dark feelings grow.
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hardcoreputa
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2003-10-29 17:21:33] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: overpowered
(User Rating: 1 ) by xianthe on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 05:53:53 PM AEST (User
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i like this...its quite angsty but youve got a grasp of imagery that isnt too metaphysical --so it isnt too alienating
well done x |
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