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Haunted Hill
Contributed by
The_Phantom
on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 02:43:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
Holiday Poetry
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A house on haunted hill, horrid screams, unexplainable chills,
Objects float side to side, a ghostly thought enters my mind,
Voices in the night, nothing to see, quit messing with me,
Flashes of a face, books misplaced,
A flicker light, a cold hand clutches a knife,
Footsteps down a silent hall, listen to them as they fall,
Closer they come, floating on air kinda like a Phantom,
Calling my name, tormented souls, playing some kind of game,
My heart begins to pound, hands reaching up through the ground,
The door creaks, damn I can't even sleep,
The moon is full, who's that talking in my living room,
I'm about to go crazy, I hear the cries of a baby,
Pulling out my hair, is there a such thing as being too scared,
Running through the house, wanting to scream, but nothing comes out,
My heart is about to explode, if I die here no one will know,
What could it be, I awake from my dream, thank God it's only Halloween.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
Copyright ©
The_Phantom
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2003-10-29 14:43:42]
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Re: Haunted Hill
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 02:58:09 PM AEST
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Chilling write. Matt..... I'm shaking..:>)
Tight.Hugs, lol
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Re: Haunted Hill
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 04:12:38 PM AEST
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gives an eerie feeling good write
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Re: Haunted Hill
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by LovingWhispers on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 05:16:30 PM AEST
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ok CUT!! Great work!
The imagery had me in a moment..a scary one lol..was like I was at the movies..really neat! |
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Re: Haunted Hill
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by silent on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 08:53:00 AM AEST
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gee i felt a little uncomfortable reading that one. nicely if not frighteningly expressed.
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