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my own back
Contributed by
loopylou
on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 01:20:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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oh please do remember all those times you walked away
and remember this moment in time
remember you cant call me mine
because im smilling at somone else
as he holds me close and i can feel his breathing through his chest
im caring for somone new
i forgot you
get it, we're through?
i want you to tell me again that i can do no better then you
and this time i wont cry
no i'll pass you by on my way to the person who wont make me cry
yes i'm loved are you?
yes i found a love that's true, have you?
oops sorry i forgot like you said about me who could love you?
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Re: my own back
(User Rating: 1 ) by michelled43 on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 08:28:08 PM AEST (User
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this poem has a lot of feeling and it really reminds me of what i just got over with my ex great write |
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