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smile for me
Contributed by
loopylou
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Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 12:42:47 PM in AEST
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you tell me you cant be happy
life is such a drag
i can change that im here now
i can put that smile back on your face
give me time
i can heal those cuts so very deep
i will comfort you tuck you up before you sleep
put a liitle trust in me
give me time
you say you feel nothing your empty
i will give you all my empathy
i can build you up strong
im giving you my love
hold on
but first give me time
and if you cant smile now ill give you mine...
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2003-10-29 12:42:47]
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Re: smile for me
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by Rage on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 01:46:57 PM AEST
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Aw, very sweet and sincere. I funny though 'cause I'm in a situation where I could be the receiving end of this... Hm... perhaps I'll give him time....
Happier Dayz,
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Re: smile for me
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by Drzewo on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 02:51:07 PM AEST
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| So optimistic and exactly opposite at the same time... when you read through it, it's beautiful... when you go through it, not so much:(( great one!! |
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Re: smile for me
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 04:35:55 PM AEST
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