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Phoenix Rising
Contributed by
Cobalt
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Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 12:40:08 PM in AEST
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Breath in some life and don't let it go, cause the shows about to start. Before it all starts just let me ask one last thing. Just how much longer did you think that I'd let you kill me? Now I've let it go on for so long. Enough is enough and soon you will see. I had burried myself out by the sea, why don't you know you could never hurt me? I will show all the world if I can be me. I've risen again and now you will know not to get in my way. If anyone should then I'll regret that then I will show them mean. I've done it their way, now I throw it back in their faces. I've done this while weak but now I grow strong. So I scream at the world to just bring it on!
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Re: Phoenix Rising
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by loopylou on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 12:46:00 PM AEST
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| very strong poem about strong feelings good on you.... |
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Re: Phoenix Rising
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by SpreadYourWings on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 01:20:34 PM AEST
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| A great positive poem about strength. I throuoghly enjoyed reading it. |
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Re: Phoenix Rising
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 02:17:40 AM AEST
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Theres that strength Im always seeing..
Well said!!
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Re: Phoenix Rising
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by Stitch on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 11:12:09 AM AEST
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Now this sounds like the guy I met in Feb. emerging.
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