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Moondance
Contributed by
lovingwhispers
on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 10:24:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Now beneath the moon I sway
A dance of heart,in silent play
To hold so near what must leave soon
An old familiar aching tune
Upon red roses,my feet are jewelled
A thorny bed for teary pools
That form as deep as oceans blue
Liquid form of me and you
Shared between the night and day
Time that quickly fades away
Until before me,silence wakes
And in a wink,my smile it takes
Dream say you,and dream I shall
But dreams I will not chase
For pursuing all my heart desires
Leads me to a tear stained face
Upon the dust of fairytales
Moonbeams and shiny stars
I have danced the velvet skies
Searching near and far
Falling after many trips
Failing in my search
I have learnt to dance my best
With these dreams on earth
Both feet on the ground
Jewelled and unabound
I will search no more for love
I will wait for mine to be found
Now beneath the moon I sway
A dance of heart,in silent play
With heart at peace and dreams asleep
My tears won't fall,my soul I'll keep
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2003-10-29 10:24:00]
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Re: Moondance
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 10:28:32 AM AEST
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| Wow. You write some incredibly powerful stuff there. Again I repeat you are truly inspirational. |
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Re: Moondance
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by Peg on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 10:39:24 AM AEST
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| Very lyrical and heart felt. A good read, I enjoyed it very much. |
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Re: Moondance
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 10:58:34 AM AEST
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my beautiful friend , you could tame the wildest heart, sooth what never could be in one with your work. don`t mean to sound gushy! but this poem has taken mine away.
what a beautiful haunting song you sing with these words. "this comment is more than I write in my poems" great work, Crow
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Re: Moondance
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 11:12:32 AM AEST
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hauntingly beautiful...a sirens song...hope that love finds you soon my friend
Shari |
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Re: Moondance
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 06:44:19 AM AEST
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| Very beautiful words ... although achingly sad, but inspiring too ... Jan |
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Re: Moondance
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by Daydreamer on
Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 09:28:32 PM AEST
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| a wonderful write. It was so sad and yet beautiful at once. I enjoyed this. great job. `Day` |
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