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The Patter of Demons
Contributed by
full_blur
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Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 01:03:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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ring my life a mortal flare
in twisting, turning and talkative dreams
still in we bathe rose-colored water
a rusty tap churning the quicksilver swallows
please sing my story, known for a time
as little we hear the patter of demons
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Re: The Patter of Demons
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by Undeadsuperstar on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 01:16:42 AM AEST
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| honestly, i have no idea what this means to you. It hold some semblance of meaning for me, it reminds me of being a child becuase children see things that adults can't. I like the meter and the slant rhymes. |
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Re: The Patter of Demons
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 01:29:55 AM AEST
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sounds freaky and ringed in mist to me. You should expand on this... it has potential
Bobo (Joel) |
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