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all things come to an End

Contributed by Cancer on Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 12:55:24 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



where love ceases to matter
where old scars don't glow so bright
where memories too painful to bear
fade from third eyesight
where you become one with Nothing
where you stand alone, without a friend
where all your money doesn't matter
where all things come to an End

when reflection is all you that you have
when the future simply disappears
when you look back and laugh
at silly dreams and pointless fears
when you wistfully realize
there's no tomorrow around the bend
when you accept that there is Nothing Left
when all things come to an End

so many loved ones left behind
so many things left undone
so many reasons that you wish
you had one more trip around the sun
your life, largely unlived
always too busy preparing
aiming to please, bowed head, bent knee
for a god who has stopped caring

handful of pills, a noose, a gun
a sealed garage and running car
a lonely razor that fell in love
with your wrists' beautiful scars
a moonlit cliff, where you can see
that no helping hands extend
depression's seed blooming like a crypt orchid
this is how all things come to an end

too many nights spent alone
too many loves left unprofessed
too many people, too oblivious to
the extent of your distress
when everything feels dead inside
when despair is your only friend
when you close your eyes and pray to die
when everything begins to End




Copyright © Cancer ... [ 2003-10-29 00:55:24]
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Re: all things come to an End (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 01:16:22 AM AEST
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Awesome Roy the last Stanza put tears in my eyes. The second to last stanza blew me away. I do have one suggestion however in yer first stanza you should change all the 'where's' to 'when's' I dunno just sounds better to me. Once again an awesome write.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: all things come to an End (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 02:20:50 AM AEST
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Awesome write ... every verse is excellent - loved this .... Jan


Re: all things come to an End (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 05:56:52 AM AEST
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YOU have a wonderful gift of writing, but I read between the lines
your pain is so much deep within
your eyes cant and wont see the light
that life is much better then what you perseive
and people around you really believe
IN YOU
life is a meaningful thing
when i can touch and read
that the person behind these words i see
is a beautiful thing.
life stopped when you lost your brother
do you think he would say
good.
no he wouldnt and you could had lived your life
smiling so he can see life in you.
think about it.
touch his soul
let him walk with you through this land of gold
one you cant see
one you cant touch
cause your so deep in darkness
you cant see in front of your face
that there is not all evil in this place
i been there and done that
and if i choose to live
then i have to wake up
and live.your choice to live in the world you have created or live in the living
and take your brother places
show him and share with him life he didnt have
and when you meet again
he will say he is glad.if im wrong
i could be
but what if im not.....love ya sandy..take care


Re: all things come to an End (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 06:28:41 AM AEST
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Such depths of sadness...excruciatingly beautiful....
Jenni


Re: all things come to an End (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 01:58:42 PM AEST
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oh wow......your words once again have touched the dark recesses of my mind......
where memories too painful to bear fade from third eyesight.....yes!!!!!


Re: all things come to an End (User Rating: 1 )
by hardcoreputa on Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 01:24:45 AM AEST
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i was in a mood to read the best dark poetry... and i fund it. you never cease to amaze me roy. its filled with so much hurt and pain. your poetry always seems to inspire me. i really like this one a lot, great job ~Apryl


Re: all things come to an End (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 09:14:45 AM AEST
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anything i have to say about this pales in comparison to the praise of your other fans. just know that i love it. Kate x




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