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Retort
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cobalt
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Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 11:45:36 PM in AEST
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Every step I take and every lie you make. I grow stronger every day and see more and more that you are weak and fake. I can see through you and your kind. None of you are special so just go back to your daily grind. I'm sorry to inform you but you're not grown up just because of your age. To be honest you've got a whole lot to learn. Like, totaly, oh my god you must be thirteen. You cheat and you lie your not worth my time. You need to open your eyes and take a good look around. A litle more thought may be a good thing as well. You could easily claim it's all of my fault or maybe for once take some of the blame on for yourself. I put out my hand, but you slapped it away. I guess I just thought maybe for once you'd get over yourself. Well I guess I'd been wrong but hey at least I had tried. One last thing before I let you go. I won't play your game I just don't have the time.
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Re: Retort
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 11:49:18 PM AEST
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Very good writing!
I can comprenda your point!
Great!
peace, joy, luv,
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Re: Retort
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 02:12:54 AM AEST
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ouch!! To the point or what?? lol
Way to go. *smiles*
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Re: Retort
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by Stitch on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 11:04:56 AM AEST
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Now this one made my face crumple. What's that called---an emotional hiccup. So much anger. I had this for a very long time. It's that feeling that you have wasted yourself on another who never understood or deserved the attention.
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Re: Retort
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by ShadowDaughter on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 03:44:37 PM AEST
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Heh.
Sounds like something off the top of your head and exactlyyourthoughtsatthemoment-ish. I like it, I think. It sort of sounds like something that needed saying, and there's always something beautiful about reading words so needing.
Yaa. On to the next poem, then.
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