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That one chick
Contributed by
rain
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Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 11:27:11 PM in AEST
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Do you know that chick sara?
Who that cute red head in english class?
NO that weird chick whos always covered in paint.
Oh the one with the half saved head
and weird friends?
Yeah thats the one, shes always talking to her self.
yeah well what about her.
Have you seen her arms?
NO what about them?
Shes got all these scars
and just the other day i saw her playing with a razor blade.
Yeah are you serious?
Yeah man shes a freak?
She must be crazy, dont you think?
She has to be why else would she do that?
Hey there she is now lets call her names.
Hey psycho whatcha doing.
Why dont you cast a spell on me you little freak?
Man that was a good one.
Yeah that was fun lets do it again after gym.
She pretended she didnt hear them and walked off to class
once she was seated in the back out of everyones view
slowly she revieled a sharp little razor blade covered in dry blood
and began to cut.
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Re: That one chick
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by Schnikes13 on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 11:31:04 PM AEST
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Wow, powerful, and hurtful.
This is so sad to see happen, yet I'm sure it does.
Great write.
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Re: That one chick
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 11:45:41 PM AEST
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Very good writing!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: That one chick
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by Undeadsuperstar on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 02:15:04 AM AEST
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| the dialogue is perfect, catches the immature malice that is so prevalent in high school. Personally,i always despised those who cut, even though i've been thru it too. But this is also a bitter reminder of why i hated high school. |
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Re: That one chick
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by loopylou on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 01:01:44 PM AEST
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| proof that people should think before acting... |
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Re: That one chick
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by michelled43 on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 03:53:25 PM AEST
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| this poem is so sad but im sure it happens all over the place |
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Re: That one chick
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 04:07:20 PM AEST
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| is this about you? seems like it... writing with that much emotion just doesn't come out of nowhere.... if it is about you I'm sorry you had to endure all that and hope you heal. keep writing it helps. :) |
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Re: That one chick
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by Edubs on
Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 10:09:30 AM AEST
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Not what I expected to read with the title it has. But what a reminder of how kids can be and how it effects the kids who are made fun of. Good write.
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