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I wanted to make you happy
Contributed by
brokenheartedfool
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Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 11:21:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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All I wanted was to make you happy
I dont want to sound sappy
I loved you more then I can say
But the ultimate price is what I had to pay
You and my son was taken
My heart feels forsaken
Why did I lose you to another man
I thought I did the best I can
Before I die let me say
I love you a lot anyway
Copyright ©
brokenheartedfool
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2003-10-28 23:21:57]
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Re: I wanted to make you happy
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by Schnikes13 on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 11:24:11 PM AEST
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So sad. :(
Good write, though. But so sad. |
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Re: I wanted to make you happy
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 11:24:15 PM AEST
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Very sad but good writing!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: I wanted to make you happy
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by Stalkee on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 07:38:20 AM AEST
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it is sad indeed. but I've noticed most of yours are =( so I won't say that everytime anymore, ha. anyways....
great write
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