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Satan's Eyes
Contributed by
brokenheartedfool
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Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 11:15:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I see through Satan's eyes
I hear all the people's cries
Death and chaos is all around me
I try to get out but I have no key
I feel my hand grab a hold of the knife
I hope I dont take someone's life
Blood splashes all over the ground
I am dead and hell bound
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brokenheartedfool
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2003-10-28 23:15:43]
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Re: Satan's Eyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by Undeadsuperstar on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 01:02:48 AM AEST
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| i love this, so short and to the point. No rambling pity's sake blubbering, like what is so prevalent here, just stark suicide plain and simple. Badass poem, I like the last line the best. Give us another. |
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Re: Satan's Eyes
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by Stalkee on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 07:35:17 AM AEST
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great job on this...it's sad, but I also think it's awesome! great work
-Stalkee |
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