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echos in my mind
Contributed by
rain
on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 11:08:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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i wander through this parralis place
never knowing wether to stay
with one deep slice i could leave
and then finally be free
no more voices haunting my thoughts
no more lonely echoing taunts
but is it worth their satisfaction
to leave my chains behind
is it worth their smiling faces
to leave the voices and the taunts
questions ever present
answers never found
if only i could live away from humans
then i could leave my chains
without giving them the satisfaction
of knowing they'd defeated me
i scream inside for silence
just leave me in my shadows
keep my name from your lips
dont look in my direction
and i'll have no problem with thee
but just don't leave me victim to my thoughts
they will surely distroy me
they echo all the things
i wish i could just sweep
out of the dusty corners of my mind
all the things they called me all my life
weirdo freak fat insane loser hey you
all the names that haunt my child hood
all the names that blacked my heart
my mind's my worst enemy
but only because of people
which in its own way explains
why it's the world that i hate
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2003-10-28 23:08:13]
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Re: echos in my mind
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by hardcoreputa on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 11:13:01 PM AEST
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| WOW! i see myself in this soo much. its a great poem filled with ideas im very familar with. keep it up, look forward to reading more of your poetry ~Apryl |
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Re: echos in my mind
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 12:15:29 AM AEST
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| Do the best thing possible. Allow yourself anger and throw everything back in their faces. Anger sometimes is the best thing to get you going. |
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