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All alone
Contributed by
mercedes
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Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 09:55:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Tonight I sit here all alone
This is how you want it to be
You said I deserve this time for myself
But how this could be, I just don’t see
The thoughts running rampant through my mind
The desire for you my body still feels
Why didn’t you want me tonight
I don’t want these thoughts that the night reveals
One left me all alone in favor of his stupid hobby
He would rather be outside freezing with a fishing pole in hand
Than here snuggled up next to me
The other said I deserve this free time
Never thought to ask if this is what I want
Somehow though this all feels like a lie to me
How is I get so close to what I truly want
I finally begin to realize my dreams are so near
Only to have fate drop a stone on my head
My trust is shattered once again, I fear
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mercedes
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2003-10-28 21:55:23]
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Re: All alone
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 10:00:44 PM AEST
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Very good writing and I know the feelings well!
peace, joy, luv,
emy
hang tuff! |
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Re: All alone
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by hardcoreputa on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 11:20:04 PM AEST
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| i feel the same way tonight... i constantly must keep myself busy to avoid hearing my voices too much. a great poem, very true for many others i'm sure ~Apryl |
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Re: All alone
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 12:07:27 AM AEST
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| I enjoyed this one very much. I would honestly just find a way to be strong enough to be content within myself. Of course I always believe in fighting for what you believe in. You will find the right person soon. Just never give up hope for sometimes it is all you have. |
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