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Worthless
Contributed by
blackfire9786
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Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 09:51:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I wish I could pound in your *****in face
God I can’t stand you, such a disgrace
Nine inch nails through your skin, oh the satisfaction
And when I’m done, maybe, a little reenaction
God I wish I could make you disappear
You’re pathetic, living your whole life in fear
I hope you know you’re nothing, you’re disgusting and you’re weak
As hopeless and no better than the tears shining on your cheek
You’re ruining your very own life, you’re completely insane
You know you’re not worth your breath, empty space with a name
All you do and all you see, you think you don’t need help?
What more proof do you need, you’re even talking to yourself.
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2003-10-28 21:51:37]
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Re: Worthless
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by deadly_blaZe on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 10:27:01 PM AEST
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i really liked this.. nice twist
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Re: Worthless
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by Rain on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 10:44:48 PM AEST
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i like this but i feel like your talking to me. it reminds me of all the things people say about me that i once believed were true.
~sara~ |
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Re: Worthless
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by hardcoreputa on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 11:22:16 PM AEST
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| homocidal rage... well rage at least.... an emotion that many people have tried to hide... i'm glad you can embrace this feeling. great write... i really love it ~Apryl |
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Re: Worthless
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 12:04:07 AM AEST
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I liked this one. I hope no one ever feels this way it's no fun. As John Melloncamp says "Oh yeah, life goes on. Even after the thrill of living is gone. Oh yeah, life goes on"
I hope my thrill of living doesn't go until after I'm gone. |
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Re: Worthless
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 02:04:06 AM AEST
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| Awesome write... |
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Re: Worthless
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 06:06:18 PM AEST
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this is really angry and yet i love it..
good stuff Lisa..
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