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SEDUCTION
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 08:16:32 PM in AEST
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Seduction means to "lead astray!"
But, who are they, that lead man to betray?
Is it our Maker, Our Creator,
Who gave his own Son's life that you
and I might run,
The race that leads to everlasting life?
How illogical this would be, to say
he loved us that much,
and then leads us astray from his way!
My Dear Kind Sir, Venkat,
'Tis man that is the seductor.
For man has dominated man to his injury
for thousands of years.
Nothing so far, has changed
his postion of "Many Tears!"
I've lived 66 years under this seduction.
Then one day I took my stand!
I've by-passed false religious leaders,
with their false religions used as a snare.
Hypocrites, who will lead you by the hand,,
not with Gods thoughts, nor words,
but with their own, slaves, then they own!
By-pass man, Venkat, dear friend,
Bow down not, to make man a God to we!
But remember Your God spiritually,
and go directly to He!
Accountable to only Him you are, you'll see.
He will give you the strength, to endure
their dominimity. but not forever, mind you...
When his time for action comes, he will show
you the way through! He's guaranteed us,
and this he will do!
Detour man and his allure,
to fascinate, to capitvate, and realize.....
Man will only enslave you,
and tell you more lies to defy!
Direct all your love and future,
To Your God, who so amply supplies,
His Truths, and Wisdom, without man's lies!
'Tis only your Creator, who will not seduce you,
nor dominate you, but will guide you, as the
"Free Moral" agent he made you to be.....
And it is He and He alone, that can set you...
Absolutely Free!
We who know, must light His candle to glow.
Holding it high, for the light of his Truths to show!
Shielding it from man's lying wind....
Showing forth His love and Kindness on high!
So that others will know and understand,
the lack of love we see around us today,
is due to man, not our Loving God ....
Then, they too, will know the reasons why!
Created with much Love
for my dear friend Venkat
Cheri Cami LeBren
October 2003
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Re: SEDUCTION
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 08:45:35 PM AEST
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Wow! Now that's what I'm talking about!
This is a masterpeice straite from heaven.
I will never 4-get when God revealed himself to me thru a friend. That's when I started breaking away from religion and the only thing I'm 100% percent of in life is that I'm Jesus kid and all he wants from me is his trust-n-exceptence!
Very good my friend!!!!
I can't express the power in this write enuff!
peace, joy, luv, trust,
emy |
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Re: SEDUCTION
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by kalika_vidya on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 04:41:24 AM AEST
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| What a wonder my eyes straightly fell on your poem..and this poem is written for my father..it is a good poem..But madam, your friend venkat is an ocean of knowledge unfathomable.he knows all these thoughts..he is more or less beyond our understanding. sure, he loves your poem as he loves such good thoughts which may please his mind..K |
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Re: SEDUCTION
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 05:29:10 AM AEST
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| Your poem as well as my daughter's comment are quite amusing..this is rather a didactic poem unnecessarily dedicated to your friend .any way your effort is great and your thoughts are very nice.. Venkat |
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Re: SEDUCTION
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 02:10:53 PM AEST
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| you rock girl!!!!!!!! |
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Re: SEDUCTION
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by LovingWhispers on
Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 11:47:06 PM AEST
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Loved it Connie..especially these lines..torrents of truth
"the lack of love we see around us today,
is due to man, not our Loving God ...."
Amen my friend..Very nice!
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