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Don't Let The Sun Catch You Crying....
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 07:22:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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As you walk with your heart...
Stepping lightly through your tears
Release the sorrow that holds you close
Before your slumber nears
As you close your eyes...
Still your longing heart roams
A soft bed for passion and romance
Dreams that have no home
When sleep has come to take you...
A journey your soul takes
You must rest your sorrows by the road
For in dreams they can't escape
If tears should paint the dreams...
On a bed of sorrow and pain
Then only the darkest canvas
In the morning shall remain
Then when your day awakens...
Again,with longing heart
You will cradle sorrow
For every day you start
Don't let the sun catch you crying...
Rest your soul and heart and mind
Release yourself into the smiles
Of the little things you find
Search not for what you ache for
Be touched for what finds you
Don't let the sun catch you crying
Or the moon will catch you too
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
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2003-10-28 19:22:27]
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Re: Don't Let The Sun Catch You Crying....
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by Schnikes13 on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 07:33:11 PM AEST
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Very inspiring!
Beautifully written! Touching! |
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Re: Don't Let The Sun Catch You Crying....
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 07:37:53 PM AEST
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wonderful
Shari |
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Re: Don't Let The Sun Catch You Crying....
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Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 07:44:54 PM AEST
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Re: Don't Let The Sun Catch You Crying....
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 08:04:02 PM AEST
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A masterpeice..... this is one of your very best ever in my humble opinion. Your talent never ceases to amaze me .
Roses |
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Re: Don't Let The Sun Catch You Crying....
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 08:05:44 PM AEST
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| i`m gona quit writing and just read! this is great. Crow |
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Re: Don't Let The Sun Catch You Crying....
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by PoeticReign on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 09:38:18 PM AEST
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this is so beautifully written. wonderful job! definitely inspiring to make me write...
~Nikki |
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Re: Don't Let The Sun Catch You Crying....
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 09:39:45 PM AEST
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Awesome!
Definently a masterpeice!
Supurb!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Don't Let The Sun Catch You Crying....
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by hardcoreputa on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 11:30:01 PM AEST
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| wow... this completely touched me. your poetry(as always) is so wonderful i can't think of words to describe it. the flow of this poem alone was amazing. ~Apryl |
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Re: Don't Let The Sun Catch You Crying....
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 11:52:00 PM AEST
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| It is truly nice to see someone who is inspiring. You write with much hope for many things and people. Probably the exact opposite of mine at times. Mine is mine for what it is. But yours is absolutely wonderful. |
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Re: Don't Let The Sun Catch You Crying....
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 03:25:28 AM AEST
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| Totally beautiful write ... lifted my spirits today ... thank you .. Jan |
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Re: Don't Let The Sun Catch You Crying....
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by blueheart on
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| I totally felt the pain and longing the poem radiated. Well done. |
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