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Scattered
Contributed by
Cobalt
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Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 02:12:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Stars burst and shattered when we met. It was plain to see that love was born in that moment. The heaves wept when we first kissed. The sun smiled upon us and the moon and stars laughed along with us as we stayed out all night. That was so long ago and we were so young. At that time we were young and unprepared. Somehow in the blink of an eyes all the grace wel held disappeared. the heavens burned and the sun, moon, and stars winked out of existence. All things happen for a reason, and our fall just one more of those litle things. ashes to ashes and dust to dust we let our love shrivel and die without a fight.
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Re: Scattered
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by sugar0986 on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 03:35:17 PM AEST
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| I like the poem. Good write |
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Re: Scattered
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 04:44:18 PM AEST
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| Nicely done a great write. |
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Re: Scattered
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by LovingWhispers on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 06:44:06 PM AEST
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| So touching..and very sad.The imagery is wonderful..Nice work |
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Re: Scattered
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by Stitch on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 10:54:13 AM AEST
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What a ride! All the joy of new love before the plunge of the roller coaster. Can relate to this, too. I sometimes wonder if we learn enough from going through this to make it worth the pain. My guess is that we do, but we don't see it until much later on.
Stitch |
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Re: Scattered
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by ShadowDaughter on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 03:41:49 PM AEST
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Okay, back where I left off.
The first sentence . . . it's a lot like a line someone I know here wrote. "Once upon the shattered stars" . . . I just can't get the image that conjures out of mind.
Don't know how much sense this'll make, but this poem --though extremely sad-- was almost inspirational to me . . . err, that's the wrong word . . . like a warning, a neverletithappen, I guess. I don't know.
So much pain . . .
--Nora |
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