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Hopes
Contributed by
MnMnMsrcool
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Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 01:53:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When is it all going to end?
The hurt and pain that you’ve caused
The suffering you put me through
I thought that it would me enough
I thought everything was going great
Until I saw you that unfortunate day
It isn’t fun you know
Knowing that all along
It has been nothing but lies
Nothing but hopes
That are now destroyed
It’s ironic that the only reason I was there
Was for you.
Copyright ©
MnMnMsrcool
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2003-10-28 13:53:01]
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Re: Hopes
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 02:16:19 PM AEST
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| I hope that you can get over him and move on to better things as quickly as possible. People who do certain things to people never deserve pity or tears. Pain goes away inspite of what memories say. Just don't let him see that he hurt you. His pity is the last thing you need or should want. |
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Re: Hopes
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 04:13:49 PM AEST
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I'm sensing some bitterness... don't let him get the best of you. Show him you don't need him. You'll find someone that treats you like you deserve to be treated, and he'll be left in the dust all alone. Guys like that always end up alone unless they make a drastic change in themselves. Just keep your chin up and walk away knowing it's his loss. Great write!
~ Moonlit |
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