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Edyaj
Contributed by
Clown_Prince
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Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 09:25:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Why do things persist this way?
Why must you torment me every day?
I thought things would have changed by now.
I'd change it all myself, if I knew a way how.
You still punish me for a sin I'm not aware of.
You are a dark raven, merely posing as a dove.
I do not know of which I've done to deserve such disdain.
And because of you my heart is full of thunder and rain.
Frustration, anger, anxiety, and pain.
By causing me this grief, what do you hope to gain?
Ever since the day we hit the ice, your heart's grown just as cold.
You should stop trying to antagonize me, now it's just getting old.
What is the reason for this, it's something I can't see.
Why can't you stop this all, and give the reason to me?
I had hoped that after everything, I could at least still be your friend.
Whatever, though. I've vented, now this poem shall end.
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Re: Edyaj
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 11:56:32 AM AEST
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| If this is about a real person just tell them to grow up and to go away. I think it's a pretty good poem and relays emotion. Just ignore people like that though. Smile in their face and don't let them see what they do or say bothers you. |
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Re: Edyaj
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by michelled43 on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 08:41:56 PM AEST
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| this poem has so much feeling revealed in it this person really needs to give it up great write |
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