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Locked up heart
Contributed by
brokenheartedfool
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Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 10:56:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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In my heart I hide what I feel
I keep it locked up with a strong seal
I dont want people to know that I am so weak
That you are what my dreams and heart seak
Inside may always cry
But outside I always try
To hide my true pain
And keep myself sane
Copyright ©
brokenheartedfool
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2003-10-27 22:56:50]
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Re: Locked up heart
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by Stalkee on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 11:12:51 PM AEST
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good write...sounds just like me.
hiding my feelings, don't want to let them show through. I hide behind a smile, so no one can see the pain.
sad, but i enjoyed it
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Re: Locked up heart
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 03:22:02 PM AEST
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I really like this. And I can relate. Great write!
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Re: Locked up heart
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by DirtyFool on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 08:52:40 PM AEST
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Good write! i liked it alot. very nice
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