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Awaken To Her Touch
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 09:37:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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And as the dawn awakens,through sleepy eyes of amber hues
She peeks into my wandering thoughts,and shines upon my muse
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Birds upon the wooden fence,gaze upon my every move
Curious of all I am,as beneath morn's touch I'm soothed
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Caressed and warmed I stretch my legs,resting feet upon the ol' wood rail
Sprinkles of sunlight,dance in my eyes,as I watch the morning unveil
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My body relaxed and massaged,by her sensual fingertips,
Reminds me how truly alive that I am,finding comfort within her kiss
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Hours could pass,and I would not be aware
Yet of her beauty,I'd be in awe
I could bask away time,within her sweet rhyme,as into my soul her song pours
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Purple fields surround me,in golden rays I am bathed
My flesh is a playground for sunbeams,on this wonderful glorious day
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And as the dawn awakens,through sleepy eyes of amber hues
I close my eyes,drift away,on sighs that come in two's
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Re: Awaken To Her Touch
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 09:41:30 PM AEST
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simply dreamy
Shari |
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Re: Awaken To Her Touch
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 09:54:50 PM AEST
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| breathtaking, beautiful, thanks for sharing this one, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Awaken To Her Touch
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 09:55:36 PM AEST
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Dreamy is right.....soothing and relaxing to read, from the pen of a master.
Roses
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Re: Awaken To Her Touch
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 12:37:55 AM AEST
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"My body relaxed and massaged,by her sensual fingertips,
Reminds me how truly alive that I am,finding comfort within her kiss'..beautiful lines..
This is a glorious poem...dear friend,
why did you miss my poem " O poets, welcome the bride!'.?..in it I made her a bride..
good luck, venkat |
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Re: Awaken To Her Touch
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 03:04:38 AM AEST
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You must have a marvelous view, such as the one I have too!
I don't always make it up at the right time though.....but when you describe it, I know!
Such lovely poetry you write, and how sharing it is of you help us to delight!
Thanking you Sharon for that you give
It's so nice read about some one who truly knows how to live!
lovingcritters'
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Re: Awaken To Her Touch
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 02:33:30 PM AEST
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| very beautiful, and such an attractive write, Crow |
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