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Belief System
Contributed by
jaeann
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Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 08:31:37 PM in AEST
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Belief in nothing
right down to the bone
no bluff or anything
changed the tone.
Belief in my all or nothing
or I'll surely damn you to hell
defeat the left side and you will sing
you'll never hear the bell.
Belief should be a personality thing
everyone to each his own
religion's violence never fails to bring
many a disheartened stone.
Belief is often a mockery
stand from the glass house and throw
the second coming a tick tockery
for those who wait below.
Belief is nothing more
than blind faith in the fear
not ever knowing the score
and forever shedding one's tears.
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jaeann
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2003-10-27 20:31:37]
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Re: Belief System
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 08:58:09 PM AEST
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I believe in your talent...but if I did not have my blind faith I would have folded to the dark side of me years ago.
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Re: Belief System
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by Crow on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 09:49:02 PM AEST
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| this is going to be a favorite of mine, you just can`t imagine how i picture you. I don`t think much could intimidate you. great write. Crow |
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Re: Belief System
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 03:17:47 AM AEST
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Oh Jaymee how very heart-breaking this poem to me is......have you nothing at all that you can believe in or put faith in?
I used to have blind faith too, and when I was apart of the religious skeem, I was the one that would wonder and team with so many that also had no faith., But now i understand it's a very personal thing...between you and him....whomever you might have faith in. Has nothing to do with religion per se, is a living faith to guide you each day!
Marvelous questioning poem, Jayme...I've asked those questions for years, until finally the answers came and buffered my fears! I love you,
lovingcritters
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