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Kiss of Death
Contributed by
sugar0986
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Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 07:37:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You had the kiss of death.
Your tongue was so seductive,
and you saliva was poisonous.
It had me wanting you forever.
Everytime you kissed me,
it would knock me to my knees,
and you had me in your power,
striving for more.
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2003-10-27 19:37:37]
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Re: Kiss of Death
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by Trisha on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 08:12:52 PM AEST
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| hey brittany. what's up? this is good. |
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Re: Kiss of Death
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by Crow on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 09:54:32 PM AEST
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| very good write! Crow |
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Re: Kiss of Death
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 09:07:25 PM AEST
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| i'm sorry but this is a really bad poem |
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Re: Kiss of Death
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 02:33:27 PM AEST
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whoever "anonymus" is, very wrong. this...is beautiful. dark..but beautiful. and i love dark poetry. i love the similes/metaphors...so lovely.
truly amazing...you're an awesome writer.
- Bethani - |
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