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Stalker
Contributed by
justinblue
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Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 07:34:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I can't think I know it all
Or off the mountains cliff I'll fall
Instead of being like a river with words fastly flowing out my mouth
I should make my ears like the cave welcoming bats
A wise man listens not only talks
Forever wisdom he stalks
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Re: Stalker
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by sugar0986 on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 07:40:14 PM AEST
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| powerful poem..... good write |
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Re: Stalker
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 07:55:22 PM AEST
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A very wise poem.
great poem. |
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Re: Stalker
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by Serendippitty on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 11:05:35 PM AEST
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Great use of words, especially the similies in lines 3 and 4. keep up the good work, and keep the poems coming!!
~*sErEnDiPPiTTy*~ |
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