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Light For The Journey
Contributed by
jaeann
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Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 07:16:10 PM in AEST
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Light for the journey
miles and miles around
the pathway became darkened
the mind was left unsound.
The withering of time comes forward
pushing the set ones off balance
destruction is all underground
lost for good every chance.
Light for the journey
crossing boundary's stone
the meadow lays empty
running wild with the roan.
The screaming cries of reality
a memory why day
good or bad it's hell left over
charged with nothing more to say.
Light for the journey
a path with only forks
the neverending story
of the mindless unhinged cork.
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2003-10-27 19:16:10]
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Re: Light For The Journey
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 08:25:53 PM AEST
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| this is great jaeann, and i felt every word you wrote, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Light For The Journey
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 08:32:22 PM AEST
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wow leaves me speechless
Shari |
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Re: Light For The Journey
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by Crow on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 09:29:52 PM AEST
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| somethings in life are like a cold supper there is never enough. this reminds me of me going back, and back. reliving with a want to relive. I`m might not be making a bit of sense.the work has done its job for me. very good write. Crow |
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Re: Light For The Journey
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 03:24:39 AM AEST
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How futile it is for me to relive or go back in my past to try to change a thing or two. i never look over my shoulder and try to remove what has been lived by me. I learned so many years ago, that if I do that, then this day, this very day that I'm living, I can't live and be free! It' like running a race.....our race of life. You can't run while looking over your shoulder, or you will stumble over a big boulder. Sometimes you can't get up, that's why I can't run and look behind me anymore. It takes all my energy to survive this day....and what happened yesterday, or what may happen tomorrow I have to set aside by the sideway!
Beautiful poetry, Jaymee you are so talented.
Love you,
ConSue |
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