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Golden
Contributed by
Schnikes13
on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 06:04:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Slowly drifting into what the world has made
Becoming someone else, while adolescents fade
With every hope,
Every prayer,
Every wish come true
Young ones learn what life can be
What wonders are so few
But it wasn’t all the same for me
I fought all I could fight
I hurt so much from my past
That I thought that pain was right
I’d wish upon a star
If there was a glimmer of light
I’d hand out smiles
If I knew that it wasn’t right
To fight with myself against everything
I ever chose to do
Sometimes I broke down and cried
And wished that I was you
A father’s disapproval of what I wanted to be
He made me feel so unimportant, filled me with insecurity
He may have never hurt my body, but just how he hurt my soul
When he said that I would never make it
He’d take my dream and break it
And destroyed what made me whole
A girl’s golden wishes are forsaken
When a father’s love is forever taken
He put the blame on me,
Shame on me
His harsh words aim at me
And now I’m broken
Childhood has spoken
And kept me so afraid
Copyright ©
Schnikes13
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2003-10-27 18:04:32]
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Re: Golden
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by Kalika on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 08:37:57 PM AEST
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woah...... so much said here, u have lotsa talent.
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Re: Golden
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by faith_my_eyes on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 02:22:37 PM AEST
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oh wow...
my heart breaks for that child with crushed dreams...
free yourself. don't let those words haunt you. |
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