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It Was All An Act
Contributed by
jaeann
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Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 05:32:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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blank and running fighting off the track
stacked and stunning nonsense all she lacks
crass and cunning her light turns to black
silly and funning she steps through the crack
rushed and gunning losing all the facts
joshed and punning it was all an act
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jaeann
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2003-10-27 17:32:11]
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Re: It Was All An Act
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by Crow on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 05:58:03 PM AEST
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| you be kind to yourself my friend. good write Crow |
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Re: It Was All An Act
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by POOBEAR on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 06:40:05 PM AEST
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Dear Jaeann,
Please don't fall . Your writing must go on.
I consider you to be someone I look up to.
A million hugs
Lynn
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Re: It Was All An Act
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 08:34:20 PM AEST
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very well written,, but sometimes we are our own worst enemies...you are someone special remember this..if you ever doubt it pm me and I will tell you again
Shari |
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Re: It Was All An Act
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 03:35:47 AM AEST
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Oh Jaymee this is the part I can never understand.
I sort of just sit back, and hope I can reach out my hand!
I love you, and I want the very best for you that life can give.
Your beautiful poetry, your wonderful little family, and how you have gone on to live. Takes much courage this old thing called "Life"....but it can be done, I know that for sure......without all this strife.
I love you,
Lovingcritters
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