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Insane Test 357

Contributed by tundrahydra on Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 02:25:15 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Why does the nice guy finish last?
Why does time tick by slowly when it should go fast?
I’m alright. I’m alright. I’m great.

Why do people look at me that way?
Why do you contradict everything that I say?
I’m alright. I’m alright. I’m fine.

Why does the world go round?
Why am I confused and never found?
I’m alright. I’m alright. I’m well.

Why is my tone raising?
Why are my eyes blazing?
I’m alright! I’m alright! I’m not well!

I’m not shouting because its fun!
No I’m not stoned and no I’m not done!
You’ll listen to me and all I have to say!

Hello and who are you.
I’m perfect. How ‘bout you?
Oh I’m alright, I’m alright. I’m fine.

Copyright Â© tundrahydra ... [ 2003-10-27 14:25:15]
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Re: Insane Test 357 (User Rating: 1 )
by Cancer on Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 05:49:44 PM AEST
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i'm at a loss for an accurate comment. something about it just hooked me. interesting piece.

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Re: Insane Test 357 (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 06:38:48 PM AEST
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interesting indeed loved the 1st question I ask that a lot myself. Good write.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Insane Test 357 (User Rating: 1 )
by Destiny on Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 08:41:04 PM AEST
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you're an awesome writer, keep at it

Re: Insane Test 357 (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 03:51:03 PM AEST
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I was hooked too - brilliant write : )
charlotte x_x_x

Re: Insane Test 357 (User Rating: 1 )
by Rawkergurl2003 on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 02:06:03 AM AEST
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cant quite explain why i like it. but i do.

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